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Thursday, August 1, 2019

We have been doing persuasive writing. This is the cause I am supporting. This is my advertisement. 
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3 comments:

  1. Gina BurkeAugust 15, 2019 at 9:41 PM

    This is really cool Dakota. I love the layout of the fish you have picked.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 18, 2019 at 5:02 PM

    Hi Dakota that is so cool. I love your fish that you picked out. maybe next time you could make the blurb a bit bigger

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2019 at 4:09 PM

    Hi Dakota, I like how you added different types of fish!
    This reminded me of a documentary on TV!
    Next time you could add how littering is affecting the fish. Maybe you could add how bad it is.
    From Elizabeth

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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post

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